The Kick video

This is my Commentating video With josh and I. First I published my writing on my blog and Mrs.McAllister
suggested to do a commentating video and here it is.I want some feedback on josh and my video like did we speak like a commentator?.Did we speak clearly?.

The Kick

The Kick

“So here it is.”

“The Rugby World Cup 2011 final.”Glanced Ian Jones.

“Hello I'm Ian Jones  and I'm Jeff Wilson we are the commentators for the Rugby World Cup 2011 final.”

“Stephen Donald got could up late for the final.”Shouted Jeff wilson.

“I think he will be extraordinary with his kicking.”

“The Kick.”

“Come on Stephen this is for the WIN!” (nervous voice) said Ian Jones.

“The Beaver is breathing so hard it looks like he doesn’t want to let his team down.”

“He’s stancing BANG The ball is spinning just like an yo yo.

“OVER!.shouted Jeff Wilson.

“ALL BLACKS WIN THE RUGBY WORLD CUP 2011.!

Blink blogging

Blink Blogging

This week i decided to write about My Speech mark work with Rilee Spooner And Mr.Anderson.I Blink Blogged about this Piece of work because. 1.I didn’t know how to use Speech marks. 2.It would help me in my writing alot more.I’m happy that i posted this piece of writing because i had to persaver and never give up.

    

This is some Speech mark work that Mr.Anderson gave me.