Ahhhhh help! I was lost in the city. I saw strangers running past me like Cheetahs having a race. I also saw loud, excited kids having fun - but I was still afraid.
I was boiling like a pot on the stove boiling as hot as fire because the scorching sun was beaming down. And I was also starving like a dog could be.I had goosebumps because I walked under a huge skyscraper and it was freezing cold. 
My hands were prickly like the prickliest hedgehog I’d ever seen.I was wobbly.I felt like I wanted to faint.I was anxious.
I saw a familiar person in a jewelry shop nearby. She was running to me!I was freaked but when I went closer I saw it was Mum!I ran and jumped into her lap and I shouted loudly to Mum because it was really windy, “I miss you Mum!"
wow good descriptive words and a good hook
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